Lost and alone,
as cold as stone,
sitting in the street,
staring at my feet.
Looking into space,
searching for his face,
so empty and gone,
you cannot move on.
As you wander alone,
you let out a groan,
as you find yourself there,
your foot on the stair.
It led to his room,
now filled with gloom,
the air full of dust,
you remember it just.
In the endless gloom,
inside this room,
the memories stir,
some are a blur,
the fall from the roof,
the tile was loose,
I couldn't get help,
You gave a yelp...
you're lost and alone,
as cold as stone,
all empty and gone,
I must move on.
Author notes
OPTION 3
My Immortal soul lives forever
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A contest entry
- Options- AND LOTS OF THEM!!! by Darkened Seraph.
825 points, ended April 16, 2007, 17 entries
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• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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really good
i really like it is reallly goo0d
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I like the title it fits really well with a good opening stanza. A sad but excellent poem.
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A fabulous poem! The rhyming works really well and the whole sense of the poem, although rather sinister is very emotive.Very good
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umm yeah that was creepy. the flow in it is brilliant and its a really emotional poem, the rhyming is strong and works really well with the emotions, well done for a good write, and good luck
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very good Lost i love the rhyming and the interesting flow, another brilliant write.
keep writing
kelbornro
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