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Hold on to Hopes and Wonders

Where are you, darling?
Are you lost again
were you dreaming too much last night?
Did your hopes get too far away?
Come back to Earth please
you're drifting too far out
going past the rings
now on your way to Jupiter.

I want you back here
holding my hand, kissing my neck.
Keep your dreams, your hopes and wonders
I'm not asking you to forget them
[hold on tight, never let them go]
but I'm hoping you won't forget me either.
Come back down here
pretty please, babe
for me?

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  • Cyanide Milkshake
    April 11, 2007
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    Is this about some dude having his head in the clouds and forgetting reality, i.e, you? 'Cause thats how it came across to me but my head is fuzzy today
    ANYWHOOO, i love the 'you're drifting too far our, going past the rings now on your way to jupiter' that was scrumptious. Maybe staple their feet to the floor? great poem, enjoyed reading as always. xxxx


    • Cokaine
      April 11, 2007
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      Yeah a bit. He doesn't necessarily forget me, but I think he forgets what his intentions were with me... *shrug* I dunno. Just thoughts, y'know how I am.

      Many thanks and much love to youuuu. :]

  • piccola
    April 8, 2007
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    Hold On To Hopes and Wonders