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Option Number Nine

In need of inspiration
a contest I have hunted
and pondered all the options
with which I was confronted.
I tried the philosophical
angelic and the dark
my brain ached with the effort
on none I could embark,
though wondrous pictures hovered
I couldn't find the words
to do them any justice
my muse was with the birds
it flew away, deserted me,
my mind was in decline
until I found the miracle
of option number nine
an option so inspiring
my muse on wings of gold
flew back as swiftly as it left
a wonder to behold
I'll never lose my muse again
it will forever shine
and all because I came across
the option number nine.



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Option number nine

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  • Rajaram
    April 25, 2007

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    Wow! Great poem. I love the movement in the poem. It speaks volumes. Dear,I wish you all success in your contest.


  • perfect-cadence
    April 13, 2007
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    lmao this is awsome


  • Recluse Writer gold member
    April 12, 2007

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    Excellent and thanks for clearing up just what option nine was all about
    The rhyme and flow to this was just perfect.
    Best of luck in the contest.
    Linda


  • Alyss in Wonderland
    April 11, 2007
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    wow, this totally beats my Option Number Nine poem. =]


  • WhollySurrendered
    April 8, 2007

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    haha...wow I never expected anyone to write such a great poem for this option! lol this was really good, and the rhyme was so great, it wasn't forced with little teensy words like you and it and me and cat and things like that. excellent work, and good luck.


  • El Pescador silver member
    April 8, 2007

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    I had to find out what option nine was. Now that I can appreciate the sheer complexity of the subject, I must congratulate you on a deep and meaningful creation.

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