Oops.. I counted && that was
One kiss to many…
You can call me a whore ‘cause it’s all my fault
I let him feed me his s|c|r|u|m|p|t|i|o|u|s
Jaw
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G Lies. x .
{.x It was fun though, I have to admit x.}
...I enjoyed him filling me up with his liquid endured
Good Byes x
I told you ((I'm sorry))
You said [[ I'll smash your face in]]
<3x<3x<3x<3x<3x<3x<3x<3x<3x<3x<3x<3x<3x<3x<3x<3x<3.....
Now she's a little whore girl
As cute and pretty as can be
x.{But}. She's a little minx when
She thinks that you can't see.....
Author notes
Pixie Dust
A contest entry
- ♥ Cheap Whore-----♥ Marines...Men.With.Muscle by Dead Star--x.
450 points, ended April 16, 2007, 9 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Hey Broken Baby Options! (Prewrites Allowed) by KittieLyyn.
480 points, ended April 18, 2007, 23 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - && [D o n ' t] I look pretty d y i n g? by LucyLightning.
500 points, ended May 8, 2007, 17 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Amazing Dirty Pretty (prewrites allowed) by KittieLyyn.
360 points, ended May 27, 2007, 9 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - ♥ Rip My Heart Out [&&] Give It To Her ♥ Drop Dead; Gorgeous ♥ by forbidden-colour.
300 points, ended May 28, 2007, 11 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Dirtty Pretty/ lokking for Ap Family by ThnxsForTheMmrs-x-.
520 points, ended June 20, 2007, 12 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Dirty Pretty- You're Gorgeous Doll by Heartbeatsxfading.
300 points, ended June 22, 2007, 11 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Buy some pixie dust and call me a catastrophe babes by CazzieJade.
450 points, ended July 22, 2007, 17 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - ~*~All Your Dirty Pretty Comes Here~*~ by xxRainbowDawnxx.
625 points, ended December 30, 2008, 58 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - ::>Dirty Pretty by Nicotine Eyes.
300 points, ended April 28, 2008, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Wow, Amazing. Well done
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This was a fantastic read. I really liked the ending. Very strong imagery throughout. Thanks for entering, and best of luck!
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Definately can relate to this one, as this is the name that most people give me. Dirty whore? Hardly, just someone who wwants a little fun and sometimes it goes out of hand [or is that the same thing?]. Nicely written babe x
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Beautiful dirty pretty, this is the stuff I love just pure and raw emotions. Just a little hurt person inside this big world of lies and deceit. Beautifully written well done for all the trophies but honestly this write is good enough for them. Enjoyed this thoroughly, took me in with it.
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Wow.
Speechless.....
Finalist.
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wonderful!!!!
lets be friends
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wow! good poem! really liked the way you visually showed the drop! Keep up the great work!
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Great job. Love this its really powerful.
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My dear, my dear, that was jsut too much, very over powering and beuatiful. it was exellent. great job, i mean it. wonderful. everything was perfect.!!!!!
good luck and thank you
much love kaydee
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wow~ The way you did the whole poem over all is VERY creative! I enjoyed it~ and thought it to be one that is more original then any others i've seen~ Thanks for entering my 2nd chance contest!
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...and yet, I am still so vain, wishing I could be like the beautiful whores, just for the lustful attention and the feeling of being desired.
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Commented On This Before I Started The Contest! Lol,
Thats A Good Sign,
This Was Delicious" DollyPie,
Sorry About The Typo Beneath
Mwah
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Wow,
Delicios
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amazing! wow you people are blowing me away with these writeS! loved this part...my jaw actually dropped.
You can call me a whore ‘cause it’s all my fault
I let him feed me his s|c|r|u|m|p|t|i|o|u|s
Jaw
D
R
O
P
P
I
G Lies. x .
{.x It was fun though, I have to admit x.}
...I enjoyed him filling me up with his liquid endured
Good Byes x
wow. good luck in the contest. -
OMGEEEEE!!!! loveeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!! Good luck in the contest!
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wow cute write!
very creative..they way you put the words..it's attractive..mmmm, nice....i have never seen a poem written like that yet mean and feel great when reading it, this poem is sad..the boy feeds u with his lies..well...whenever a boy treats you like that, a good poem comes to show...yeah...and anyway, kick him and drop him..he belongs among the cow's dung..or the ditch...but well, this poem is impressive really...i like how you write it..and how you arrange the words...it's cute..yet i can feel the heat of your anger/frustration/misery....anyway..keep this up...this poem is a BBQ!!! and i mean well of it..
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I love the fact you used such reality and life can be so cruel but people close their eyes to the things we don't want to see so well done I absolutley love it
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a m a z i n g
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i like this,
{.x It was fun though, I have to admit x.}
...I enjoyed him filling me up with his liquid endured
Good Byes x
that line the best just because its so true! thanx for entering im adding you as a finalist good luck!
PrettyxImperfection
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