bright day is ending
sun is sinking in the west
sky is coloring
vivid pink, gray, white and blue
very soon comes velvet night
In a list
A contest entry
- Form Poetry by Harrisham Minhas.
600 points, ended April 12, 2007, 20 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Pre-writes Only....Give me your 25th poem by PurpleSky.
475 points, ended June 3, 48 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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I'm not sure I understand what a Tanka is. but I like this poem it is very pretty with lovely imagery!
Good luck in the contest.
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Your short form poetry are favorites of mine. It seems like I have read this before...I know I like it. Best to you in the contest.
Sam
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Wonderful imagery in this Tanka.
It paints a beautiful picture.
Thanks for your entry. Good luck in my contest.
Be Serene,
Spread Peace,
Harrisham Minhas.
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the image, here, is very memorable - one seen hundreds of times, for the very first time, your words offer new light to an old scene, released afresh in my mind's eye. I love the form, never tried it – too daunting for a weak heart. Blessings and best wishes, ~richard
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