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Get Out Of My Head

Get out of my head

I'm not yet dead

Beat beat beating

the sound of a drum

my head to the floor

my screams NO MORE

No more of you

No more of me

Get out of my Head

For Now I'm Dead

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  • Naridill
    April 9, 2007

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    Hey awesome write, simple yet somewhat captivating. Alot to be read between lines aswell. Short and simple but very powerful.

    But which option, sorry unsure.