Everything is black.
I'm climbing into that deep, dark hole,
Waiting for the attack.
The point in time where EVERYTHING is chasing me,
and there's no looking back.
It consumes me now, takes over my mind.
That stabbing pain, like a sharp metal tack.
The blindness and exhale of thoughts.
Never left my mind, its black.
A contest entry
- Metaphorical beauty 5 options by bigXfatXemo.
525 points, ended April 12, 2007, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Dark
Wow this is a fantastic expression of just a single colour, I love it! You've really put across a lot of emotion here in such a short space. Definately a feeling I can relate to, so thankyou for sharing. Loved the loose rhyme here as well, really adds to the flow and structure of the poem. Overall an excellent write, good luck in my contest!! Thanks for entering =]
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very very nice meggle...wow. you're really becoming an excellent poet!...i told you your poetry would get really really good! good luck in the contest!
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