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Kleeshay

i bared my soul
and wrote my heart
then bravely let you see
the fragile fears
and dreams that constitute
the inner me
how clever that you
analysed
all i had to say
and with your
intellectual might
reduced it to 'cliche'

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  • Haiku-bless-you silver member
    August 28, 2008

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    HOODWINKED !!!

    Good flow and rhythm in this thoughtful look at an uncomplimentary slight of a poem. Poems are our children and we want them appreciated as we have labored to bring them to life and have shared them in our joy. There are many thoughtless critics out there, too bad. Write on dear poet.

    You have been Hoodwinked today by the Poetic Bandits because WE CARE!

    Dennis


  • El Pescador
    April 8, 2007
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    Clever - the blight of the poet! Nicely done.