I miss you so much,
It's making me weak
It's 12 midnight,
and i can't sleep
I've been tossing and turning,
all night in my bed
I can't seem to get thoughts of you-
out my head
It's been only 2 days and I miss you so much
you don't know how i long for your touch
For some reason,
I can't seem to get thoughts of you out my brain
I miss you so much,
I'M GOING INSAINE!
I need you by my side,
Without you,
I'm losing my mind
I'm waiting for you to call
I'm sitting by the phone
Without you
I feel so alone
I feel so empty
I feel so weak
It's 2 in the morning-
and i can't sleep
Author notes
option 2
A contest entry
- Whatever you want by whispernthedark.
541 points, ended April 10, 2007, 63 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Make me cry....options =] and PW allowed :D by LeilaJayne.
900 points, ended May 17, 2008, 33 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Nice job, thanks for entering. whisper
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hmmmm again another great poem i liked it alot your a skilled writer great job
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Wow. I LOVE this poem. Very well done. I love the rhyming and the way you said what you had to say. I think that the repition of the time and not being able to sleep is a good touch. I can definately relate. Great job!
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i love your style in all of your poems. this one is great. and you make them so relatable and it makes the poem all that much better to read
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Wow. That's all that I can say...
...Wow.
This poem was powerful and full of emotional. *applauds* Such talent, and the words are all so meaningful.
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wow..... this is really good. I see exactly where your comin from. Great Job AP buddy
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This is a sad and emotional poem you wrote here, we have all been there and done that, been through it all you just have to keep your head high and take life as it comes your way. Well written poem
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This is really pretty, and I can relate to this so well except I go for weeks if not mnths at a time with out seeing my man and it hurts so bad...
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Made me smile. Ive done this before. *sigh*
Really good write hun.
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Terrific
I smiled when I started to read this, because I can see myself in this same postion. HA. I love it, it's deep but at the same time playful. I love it. Your words definitely are perfect here. I love it. Can't wit to read more like it!
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loved it! great write. great flow, nice emotoin put together quite finely. i really liked this piece. nicely done.
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