For you I'd cross the ocean,
I'll jump in the sea
I'll walk 50 miles,
[if it meant we could be]
I'll give up my i-pod,my cell phone and jewels
All this I'd do [if it meant to see you]
For you I'd sell my soul to the devil himself
I'd be by your side if you needed my help
I'd give up my froggies,
If it meant to see you
There's nothing invented that i wouldn't do
I'd give up my kidney,any body part you'd needd
I'll miss important school days just to see you succeed
I'd cry you a river if you wanted to swim
And if you requested a pencil,
I'd give you a pen
For you I'd do whatever...
Casue deep down i know-
that this...is forever
Author notes
it's kinda corny...no its REALLY corny...but it was 12 midnight so cut me some slack...lolsz...love kind of does this to you =P
A contest entry
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That's cute. I like "I'd give up my froggies" and "I'd cry you a river if you wanted to swim." Creative! Good luck in the contest and thanks for entering!
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Really nice.
Good luck in my contest!
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Just a bit corny, lol
But so so so so so good! And cute! And just absolutely wonderful! I really liked this, and in this case corny is good. I like corny cheesy stuff anyways! LOL Right, so, this was really well done! I loved it! Fantastic job -it showed some real good emotion. Thanks for entering -good luck! -
thanks for entering and good luck
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haha i liked that one its pretty damn good ace ever
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Awww. That made me smile. Great poem.
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awww is not corny its sweet ^^ i like it
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yet again, great write, u gots some real talent
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this is really cute, I agree a little corny but still really cute and really sweet... I wouldn't mind if my guy wrote me something like this.... I would be actually really happy... Awesome work!
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I like the imagery and the parts like Id cry if u wanted to swim.. really sweet! Loved it.
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Interesting
It makes me laugh. Not because its funny. Because it's so realistic. Seriously, I think I've said that to me self 1,000 times. It's amazing how you can put real emotion into such simple terms and make it so life-like. Feels like something I would say. "I'd give up my I-pod". Love that line. Genius.
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