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Come A Little Bit Closer

I wanna feel you
I wanna love you
I wanna make the things as you like
I want you forever in my life
I want you to come a little bit closer.

I want to feel your pains in me
And give all my happiness to thee
Because after loving you there is no separate me
And I want you to come a little bit closer to me
So that our souls may be united till eternity.

Come a little bit closer my life
As I want to see in your eyes that light
Of love and care.
Come a little bit closer so that I can read that promise
Of being by my side always.
Come a little bit closer so that I can hear
The words that your heart does whisper
Come a little bit closer
So that you can also hear
What my heart wants to say,
It does pray
"Always be in my heart and never be away."

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  • Welcome-To-Hell
    April 8, 2007

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    This is a wonderful write and a great sentiment towards someone you love well done best of luck to you in the contest


  • Romily
    April 8, 2007
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    valo hoyeche!

  • Leaving Today
    April 8, 2007

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    "Because after loving you there is no separate me"
    Nicest among all the lines of this beautiful piece.