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Sweet




chocolate eggs
melting under the sun
sweeten the bunny





















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Last Easter we have some chocolate eggs hidden in the garden, weather was then quite warm and the bunnies were 'sniffing' in the backyard. They looked then not as white as usual.
Wishing you all a peaceful Easter!

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  • Peteskid gold member
    July 4

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    choco covered bunnies, a sight that will be remembered, the joy they give us...wonderful...h

  • Yemassee gold member
    April 10

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    It's Easter time again. Someday I'm going to make every holiday a big deal...just one year...celebrate them all in style. I think I'll need to borrow some kids for Easter though...nah, I'm a kid...I'll hide the eggs on myself...I did that one year...no, not on myself, on J's daughter. That was a fond memory.

    Send me some candy eggs.


  • Blushfulmoon silver member
    September 27, 2007

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    excellent~

    Another wonderful haiku....
    You could always do haiku so good....
    I am so envious of you at you being so good with these lol...
    Perfection...
    Hugs
    Susan~~~


  • individuality gold member
    August 30, 2007

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    ah i just went shopping before and did not buy myself any chocolate now i am kicking myself because of that


  • leo2
    April 14, 2007

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    I can imagine it has been done countless times by well intentioned parents and impatient children.

    Sincerely,
    Leo Long


  • macandrew
    April 11, 2007
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    A wonderful image. I can imagine a sleeping bunny being licked clean by wandering bugs. Wow, didn't these tasted that good.

    John


  • leander Moderators member
    April 10, 2007

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    lol instead of bunnies you had brownies that day a lovely image you have described here sweet mommer how's you doing by the way? It's so freakingly busy over here lol


  • pandora ink
    April 9, 2007

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    Oh I want a bunny! Especially one tht would be covered in chocolate, because I think that would be super cute. Pfft, I just want a cuddly rabbit! Maybe someday I will have one, when I have kids of my own.

    Happy Easter, Mom!
    Elisa

  • a u r a
    April 9, 2007

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    This made me smile Mari, you have this wonderful knack of writting about the simplest things in a most beautiful manner that stirs the reader


  • Rj
    April 9, 2007

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    Easter proof
    That chocolate bunnies
    come from eggs...

    Thanks for the smile,

    ~RJ~


  • Desire gold member
    April 8, 2007

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    Wow!!

    Precious Piece You have penned Sweetness
    Love this Haiku!!!
    Hope You are having a Beautiful holiday

    Hug to Family!!
    Thank You for sharing this Treat!!
    Many blessings to You
    Missed Your presence~
    Happy You are on..~Wooooooo hoooooooo~
    Best wishes too
    and much love~ Desire~*~


  • acqua
    April 8, 2007

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    Ohhh, this is 'sweet' and you are so amazing with Haiku, this is a lovely treat for all of us and I wish you a Happyand Peaceful Easter, too!


  • forty-one
    April 8, 2007

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    Really enjoyed

    Darn it, you write these haiku like you were born to do so. So much to see in this, and Yem's comment made me laugh. You two are so beautiful... it almost hurts.
    Happy Easter!, and thanks for sharing this.

    41

  • Joao Camilo
    April 8, 2007
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    You know, this is the nightmare time of the day for those with diabetes problem


    • Mari Goes gold member
      April 8, 2007
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      Here we have all kinds of chocolates, even diabetic ones

      • Joao Camilo
        April 9, 2007

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        But have you seen how expensive they are? I guess the tatic is making no diabetic person to eat any chocolate at all. Ice cream then... The only thing which the price is even is Coca-Cola, but then Coca-Cola is evil and want to control us


  • ceegeeess
    April 8, 2007
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    Easter feast!

    Your nice haikuislike an easter feast for the readers. Great poem.


  • Sai Babas Lotus
    April 8, 2007

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    LOL...So cute and so yummy! I wish I could eat those bunnies...love chocolate Happy Easter and thank you for such a nice haiku

    Charish

    • Mari Goes gold member
      April 8, 2007
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      You my dear Charish, stay away from my bunny (now just one, Snow White died last November), she is off limits lol

  • Yemassee gold member
    April 8, 2007
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    The bunnies got into the chocolate? Oh what a waste of chocolate! You have cute bunnies btw...innuendo intended.

    You are the mistress of haiku...teach me your ways! Happy Easter!

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