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Fionuala's Sweet Sixteen!

Thank you for so many smiles
my lovely blue eyed miss;
for sixteen years of memories
and every goodnight kiss;
the frowns and scowls
the tears and fears,
but so much laughter too.
Fionuala, HAPPY BIRTHDAY!
Lots of love
from me to you.







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With love from mum for 10th April xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

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  • Swan song gold member
    July 22, 2007

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    That would be a birthday card that I would love to have. Nice tone to it a feel good poem but not too rich


  • paperparadox silver member
    April 10, 2007
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    This is gorgeous! So full of love and pride...makes tears well in the eyes, it does!

    You can't beat a mother's love, and it shines through magnificently here, Kath. I'll bet Fionuala is a credit to you. She is certainly gorgeous looking (just like her Mum).

    Beautifully written. Beautiful. Well done.


  • El Pescador
    April 8, 2007
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    A beautiful poem for a beautiful young lady. You must be so proud, Mum.


  • Cannonsfire
    April 8, 2007

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    Ah sweet sixteen wish I could remember it!! Lol I hope your dear one has a wonderful day