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Isolation=Resentment

My Loneliness= Danger
My Isolation = Pain
My Neglect  = Anger

It's Driving Me Insane

My Desolation= Resentment
My Weakness  = Sadness
My Seclusion = Contemptment

It's Leading Me To Madness

My Solitude  = Rage
My Abandonment= Fury
My Room      = Cage

I'm Found Guilty By The Jury

My Rage  = Brutality
My Fear  = Distraught
My Actions= Criminality

My Captor Must Be Taught
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kinda just a spew of how im feeling..theres a hidden story in there ...Do you know what it is?

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  • PrInCeSs AnAsTaCiA
    December 28, 2007
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    hey good wrk i get it hehe yay hope u had a good xmas n happy new year xx stace


  • Darkvampireprincess
    April 15, 2007
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    Hmm.. this was very simple. In my personal opinion, it was too simple, but others have different tastes. Nothing really stood out to me; it is extremely average and almost monotonous.
    The feeling is there, and I can see that you have a style, i just think that if you worked on how you expressed these things the piece would be even better.
    Keep going strong :]


  • UnderTheRadiantSky
    April 13, 2007

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    hey i have a similar format poem like this. but this is an intersting write where you used the equal sign. nice thought.


  • D-niecee
    April 13, 2007
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    This is good I liked it I just dont know if it was to many = but i liked it .Good job