Deep into the night
my dreams, they do soar
lifting up my spirits,
leaving me wanting more
And each night they grant,
to me, a different scene
playing hopes far and wide
and everything in between.
My dreams, they tell a story
of a girl stubborn, yet true
a girl whose hope was lost,
but recovered anew
And so they go on,
leaving traces of a broken heart
deciding amongst themselves
to paint another work of art
As the pages do turn,
each dancing among the stars
the girl is given courage
as she journeys from afar
She fights many battles,
and swims through raging seas,
and through much of her dispair,
her hope will never leave
And so the dreams remain,
the story does go on,
and the girl stays always true,
for it's the dreams where she belongs.
Author notes
I hope this is along the lines of what you were looking for! I am a dreamer, so this is how I came up with this poem. Thank you for the inspiration!
A contest entry
- Describe Yourself by Random Lily.
1062 points, ended April 10, 2007, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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This is very well penned!
Keep on dreaming! AND writing!
Write on!
*PEACE*
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Nice work. If you can dream it, you can become it, so they say. I believe it to be true, so keep on dreaming.
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nice rhyming and nice flowing
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I really like this, especially the end. Very hopeful and nice. Love the way you phrase things too. Much luck in the contest!
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A dreamer, eh? I really like this. Has just a nice, smooth and dreamy feel to it. Dreams are such interesting things because we have them both asleep and awake. And sometimes we wonder which are the more real.
Good job on the writing. The rhymes are good and they fit well. And, dreams are kind of a work of art aren't they, often real but often fantasy as well. Nice job Miss V.
Grampa Paul
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