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*Insert name here*

My happiness
Mixed with sappiness
Equals heartache
Which will lead to heartbreak

Gave up on love
I held it above
Until I met you
It wasn't true

You're joy in a form
Your smile's so warm
I have no other way to exspress it
Can't you understand it, DAMMIT

*Insert name here*
I heart you, so dear
It's four words, just a few
I absolutely love you












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STUPID LOVE POEM!

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  • Kevan
    April 8, 2007

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    lol, definitely NOT stupid! This is great... an excellent poem about heartache/heartbreak and loving someone secretly. I think you did a really sweet job on this and I was glad to hear you rhyme. Good work! Keep it up!

    ~Kevan~

    P.S. Happy Easter Kaitlin!


  • nichtmich silver member
    April 8, 2007

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    Well Done!

    Not really so stupid. It's not too mushy and the *Insert name here* makes it funny. Now you have a form love poem that you can just change names whenever you want to and never worry about it anymore. Now that's efficient!