A pleasant time
Of innocence and magic.
A childhood
That my life never knew.
An existance
With wishes and dreams,
That never came true.
A youthful time
For me,
That was dead
Before I knew it was gone.
A contest entry
- † What You Can't Get Back † by Cupcake Craziness.
800 points, ended April 21, 2007, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Be as critical as you can, but also tell me what your emotions say.
Comments
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I like this poem hunny, it's cute. I like it.
Love you always and forever,
~Alix -
I hear you all too well with every word. Good luck in the contest with this killer piece.
(sorry for the lack of a decent comment but I haven't slept in over 24 hours)
MORSMORDRE!
- The Dark Lady
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don't worry about how big your comment is, I just like having comments, and I value you opinion. I hope you get some sleep soon.
-John-
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Nice
Very good write....I like the way you use such a short poem to convey such a strong meaning as this...plus it can be taken so may different ways...very good
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