It is a love-gift;
Enclosed in my flesh
And blood,
A secret to be shared
On some full moon
Connected
By the silver
Glory of that ring;
Fleeting on the
Edges of some
Passionate frenzy,
We are one
Soul and mind
And body;
Cherished as
The autumn winds,
As the first flower
Dancing in the wind
To kiss the golden sky;
It is a love-gift;
I have kept it close,
And you must wear it well.
Please tell me what you think
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Very deep and full of emotions. I love this write. It is so talented and full of soul. It is almost a song of life flowing free from the heart, great job. Keep penning my friend. God bless you and hope all is well.
Tabitha -
Umm twiny this is really beautiful but im sorry 2 be a critic or somethin but i dont really understand wat is tha topic its not so clear 2 me sorry....
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just a promise to a future husband that i'll be a virgin on our wedding night lol...like, the line that says the "silver glory of that ring" is really talkin about a wedding ring or w/e. Anyways thanks so much for the comment!!
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