I watch her sit there,
she is adicted in so many ways
nedle marks flow all over her body,
like the wind flow's through the trees.
people say she is helpless,
but i have a difrent view,
See no one is helpless untail they chose to be,
she screms i wouldent be like this if it wasent for u.
so u caused her to be like this,
and now she is floating away
u ask how do i know this,
I know because i am this girl
A contest entry
- How you feel about drugs by 6-Ft-UnDeR.
300 points, ended May 17, 2007, 21 entries
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awesome
I like how you say at the end "how do I know this? because I'm her" really good way to tell everyone about pain and sadness, then to tell the reader at the end that its you going through everything you said. nicely written. Keep writing, I look forward to reading more
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