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Heaven and Hell

I look up to where the clouds are found
Hoping to go where God's chivalry abounds


But from below my feet I hear the yell
Satan's shreik pulling me down to hell

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  • Lj-
    April 14, 2007

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    You've forgotten to separate the couplets with spaces as specified.

    I like this piece. Good description.


    Thank you for your entry,
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