Stranger:
You must know
words are just
grey, fading
away as someone
miles away
closes his eyes
and only
contemplates
what it might
be like with
you in his arms.
Les cheveux,
Les yeux-
I can paint
a perfect
picture;
but I'm only
sand that's
washed away-
these waves
are crashing
down:
breathe,
breathe.
Three words
are not enough;
love silently
endures.
Author notes
Lines of a second.
I still have that letter.
A contest entry
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Comments
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mmm different. I like it but it lacks a little substance. Good write and thanks for entering.
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Thanks for entering and good luck.
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very sweet. i enjoyed reading this! good luck!- Captain Obvious
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nice write , thank you for entering the contest, good luck and keep up greta job
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It wasn;t as powerful as I was expecting but it was an all around beautiful poem. I enjoyed readng it. It made me a little sad but it didn't exactly make me want to cry. My favourite part was,
'words are just
grey, fading
away as someone
miles away
closes his eyes
and only
contemplates
what it might
be like with
you in his arms.' For some reason it called to me. Thank you so much for entering my contest. Good Luck.
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