Behold the streams of emotion
From the droughty eyes
They flow for no one
They evaporate for someone
The air does not belong to me
The breeze mixes with the sea
Dark whirling potent strands
Inhuman cruel dirty sands
Blind my eyes with filth
Long lost world of humans
A tragic reminder to animals
None remain to wonder
None have the guts to ponder
Globally warm and cunningly cool
Poisonous snakes in a human pool
Desirous of friendships
Oblivious of hardships
Frenetic to the lazy
Idle to the hasty
Good to the nasty
Hateful to the sweet
Streams of emotion cry
For the dear departed
Please tell me what you think
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a good poem, ah humanity, we are a crazy race at times i agree, we are but animals, ruining with global warmth yes, messing it up for all that live.
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nice nice
hey that was lovely! so so sorry i havent been on in along time! life has gotten so busy! but im glad to see you stil wrighting amazing stuff
love
ana
xxxxx
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From the droughty eyes
They flow for no one
They evaporate for someone
you touch that depth.. once again!
loved this one..
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Doomsday.... we are the dear departed... brilliant shubs and I have missed you and your work K x
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very good
there are a lot of people out there today that have no guts to ponder anything at all they watch one news chanel and go strictly by their point of veiw or read just one book on a subject and take that for gospel it is sad keep doing well
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Luv the synonyms. beautiful piece. I myself, have been having trouble writing for a long time, I knew that i'd definitely get inspiration from you, as always. xx
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interesting. original. good job with writing this. worth the read. enjoyed.
blu
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extreamly well done
it sounds like most of the people i work with down at the city mission i think that this is one of your most powerful statements ever well done and keep doing well
love the papa
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Been awhile Shubs am pleased to see you post another profound provoking write in your trademark style and grace.
Your title sums up the poem and all the thoughts therein penned from your heart I feel the many layers I see Thank you for the pleasure and the thoughts that linger which i take with me to ponder over in the samll hours of this Easter morn.
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Shubs, my friend,
WOW!!!!! This is great!! You have said sooo much in this one!! I really don't know if I have any words to say what this one means to me. or what I get out of it! Thanks for this gem my friend!!!
Loves ya
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Thank You
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