The loved dont die alone falling
When the Angels come a-calling.
Locked in the embrace
Of love's eternal grace,
They rise up under angelic wing.
Author notes
Ok....not sure why this came out as a limerick, but hey!
In a list
A contest entry
- Love is... by Dusty.
513 points, ended April 27, 2007, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Simply Beautiful!!!
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Hey ~ this is great, an uplifting limerick indeed...
Puts me in the mindset of; being happy in life lends you to being content in death, therefore, you can move on and not end up trapped here in limbo.... [don't know if that makes sense to you but it does for me..lol]
I like it!!
Jeffro -
Beautiful!!!!!! and I think that sums this up rather well!!!! I love it and well with that said, the amazing feeling that this gave me is amazing!!!!! Thanks for sharing the limmerical gem with us!!!!!!!
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this was short but it was also a very well written piece keep up the awesome work... and i hope to read more of this ...
Krissy -
Awesome Thoughts
I really can believe in yourr limerick. I share a belief in angels and eternity with God. You painted a wonderful image with these few short lines. Great Job!
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Awesome lines. I believe in angels, I am married to one and also believe that they are all around us even if we can't see them. I feel protected by an aura of love and I know it's my guardian angels watching out for me. I like the thought of never dying alone because they will be there to catch us when we fall. Thanks for sharing and best of luck in the contest. James.
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A lovely poem about long lasting love
Good luck in the contest, this was a good limerick although it was more serious than most limericks.
Thanks for your comment
Pozo
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Ahh this is amazing! So peaceful,short but very beautiful though. I wish you good luck in the contest!
Keep writing & God Bless
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haha, nice catch on noticing its like a limerick, just showed you have the knowledge to match the talent. greatly written, love the lines "Locked in the embrace
Of love's eternal grace,"
they were orchestrated perfectly to give it that much more beauty. keep it up, and good luck in the contest
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fantasic!!
some of the best form i have seen
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Ohhh I really like this!!!
I cant really do form to well
It constricts me to much, but this is a great write!!
Amazing job Doll!!
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Thats really good I think The best so far.
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wow, thanks!
glad you enjoyed it!
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