Love makes you fell like you can fly
It makes you fell as tho you could never die
Love will keep you in heaven not hell
Even if not all is well
Love is like a kiss on the cheek
An action which works more then speech
Love is holding a friends hand
Knowing that they love you is more then grand
And love is the feel of a blade on your skin
Feeling like you will never love again
Love is watching the blood fall down
While the tears in your eyes might drown
Love is when heaven is hell
And you know that all is not well
But love is seeing all things not grey
And love loves you Everyday
Love is pushing back your past
That perfect person that makes it last
Love is like a drug it numbs the heart
So you never know when the end starts
Love is looking into the eyes of him
And knowing for him you live
Love knows he'll stay by your side
Whatever yo do he's right by you
Love is giving up something for them
Love knows that they'll be there
Love is knowing that everything will be alright
And love is what keeps me going through the night …
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A contest entry
- Tell Me Love Exists by LunaAmara.
600 points, ended August 2, 2007, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Wat u think bout love ♥ by loveaswellashate.
375 points, ended August 19, 2007, 42 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Teenage Love Poems (May Be Prewrites) by ChrissyJean.
330 points, ended October 8, 2007, 49 entries
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Comments
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Wow. Interesting write. I can relate totally!

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I like this sweety you have done a nice job with this i cant believe it did not place in the contest. I would of choose it
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This is really good.. i liked it.. sry its taking so long to judge the contest.. the break is ending and everything is crazy so thanks for ur patients..
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this is so very true--and i really like this
although i'm not sure i like the "u" instead of "you", otherwise, it's grear
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Wish i understood love at that age
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