Time is spinning around me
Whirling these days faster then ever
In the middle as if in water
Paused in silence waiting
For the music to resume playing
While my heart continues beating
My mind searching, thinking
Choices bobbing before me
Waiting for my answer
Overwhelmed by the stand-still
Wishing to see the effect
Of decisions placed at my feet
Bending forward amidst it all
Placing my heart in safety
Believing till nothing else remains
I choose You.
Author notes
In life we have a million choices to make. Between good and bad. Some easy, some hard. But the most important choice, the best decision we could ever make... is choosing God.
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good source to hope... not many people turn to that... you're right, though... in the end that is all that will remain... thank you for entering and good luck in my contest...
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May we always make that choice, and believe till nothing else remains. (I loved that line!) Very nice.
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We all have decisions in our life to make and hope that we all the right ones, some tough and some easy but in the end we always seem to make the right decision. Well written poem dear poet and good luck in the contest
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