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*Twinstar*

Together you and I appear as one, although we are seperate.

We are two united and can be seen from afar in the night.

In giving light to darkness we are like sparkling stars,**

Never to fear being alone, as you are always there,

Shining ever so brightly into infinity with ~love.

Timeless beauty is surrounding us as we are,

Always in fairytales, fantasies & dreams.

Reminding us that love is...eternal~

 

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"T w i n s t a r" : Is mean't to reflect and represent polarities in balance with the yin, yang qualities within oneself. Acrostic

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  • KnightOfTheRose gold member
    October 27
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    I liked this. A beautiful acrostic. Explains your user name too Thank you for taking the time to enter. Excellent work and best of luck to you in my contest.



    -Steve-


  • Abby In Chains. silver member
    October 24
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    I really liked the hopeful mood of this. Well done with the acrostic.
    Thanks for entering and best of luck to you.

    Abby


  • KnightOfTheRose gold member
    September 6

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    Ah. this is a beautifully written acrostic. I like your Yin and Yang idea. Thank you so much for taking the time to enter. Excellent job on this and best of luck to you in my contest



    -Steve-


  • Ann45 gold member
    July 7
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    Nice

    very nice, I enjoyed this. well done love the picture and the background


  • Andre ben-YEHU
    July 6

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    Beautiful...


    This is an excellet acrostic... *Twinstar*{Acrostic} is bountiful, beautiful and unique.

    In respect and admiration,

    Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU


  • Dark Otter
    October 12, 2008
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    The only problem

    I have with it; is that it is a psuedonym acrostic. I like the thought behind it. It is well crafted.


  • Dark Otter
    October 2, 2008
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    I just plain like it!

    The background, the pic and the poem all work together to produce the final result, a very stunning poem. Thanks for an eye-catching work.


  • Haiku-bless-you gold member
    June 26, 2008
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    HOODWINKED !!!

    Deb,

    Once again your creativity and talent shines bringing beauty with much grace. For a First Acrostic you have done great, You're a natural!

    You have been Hoodwinked by your Bandit Family today because WE CARE!

    Bandits Rock!

    Dennis


  • Dark Otter
    June 26, 2008

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    Hoodwinked!

    Very creative, the form is unique. I like that you have incorporated your philosophy into your psuedonym. Not many understand their multiple energies and personalities


  • Sharcu silver member
    June 26, 2008

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    Hood-Winked!

    How you put it on the page, how you composed it, how it flows well... Everything about this is absolutely fabulous! You have a really great talent for writing poetry


  • LoveSpell-PurpleRose silver member
    June 5, 2008

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    Well Written !

    I was very inpressed with this poem , both in the word's as well as form. I really love the part where. Togeather you and I appear as one,Although we are seperate....I would say that you hit a home run with this one !I really do love the poem as a whole, just thought that I would make a statement where it started ti attract my attention, and that is from the very start! Brenda Gae


    • Twinstar
      June 6, 2008
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      Thank you Brenda! for taking the time to read this acrostic poem. I appreciate you stopping by.

      Love & light
      Debbera


  • poeticweaver gold member
    February 25, 2008

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    Beautiful...

    I enjoyed this form and flow to go right along with it.
    Thnaks for sharing you, love the way you weave poetry.

    Peace, Timothy


  • grannyeri gold member
    February 3, 2008

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    LOvely presentation on this page, and a great acrostic you have written about your name. Liked the shape of it too.


  • Mirrors shard
    December 19, 2007

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    beautiful

    i really like the style of the poem and the words and images u used really make it BEAUTIFUL! l


  • raggyann
    December 16, 2007

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    this was awsome i realy like this poem and the way you layed this poem out
    i like this poem just like you wrote it no parts better than another wonderful


  • freespirit51
    November 11, 2007

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    Terrific. You almost sound like you are a gemini, the astrological twin. I enjoyed reading this acrostic and it is amazing how it lined up as well. Great work poet.


    • Twinstar
      November 11, 2007
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      Thanks for your nice comments on this poem, I am actually an Aquarius... I'm glad you enjoyed this piece!
      love & light
      Debbera

  • angelelectra
    September 17, 2007

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    aha, i always wondered where you got the name Twinstar from!
    your acrostic's format is very eye-catching0 i like it! its usually quite hard to make full, connecting sentences out of acrostics but you did a marvellous job with this one!
    take care!
    Love,
    Neera


  • heygoo
    August 20, 2007

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    This can be taken many different ways. I like that in a poem. Not all spelled out. A think for yourself piece. Perhaps you had only one meaning in mind, but the doors are left open for others to explore.


  • Dobbie73rip
    June 27, 2007
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    very girly, i love it

    i like all the sparkels. Your poems are always beautiful

  • Ankeeta silver member
    June 17, 2007

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    first attempt! .very nice ....made me get back into romantic mood again lol.....thanks for sharing

    Ankita


  • Twinstar
    June 15, 2007
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    Thanks for reading this poem and I'm pleased you enjoyed it!
    Love & light
    Debbera


  • Jessica Lyndsay
    June 13, 2007
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    I love that poem! Feel free to check out my page anytime!


  • Florida Sunshine
    June 8, 2007

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    aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah thats so beautiful! Really is! I love the poem and the format is PERFECT ~ Really nice job!


  • samueldouglas
    April 24, 2007

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    I like it very much. I am not a huge fan of acrostic, but this one is alright- It actually says something. You end it perfectly. Also, you were marvelous in the form of this poem, look at the perfect downward diamond!


  • The Poetic Bandits gold member
    April 22, 2007
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    3 claps...9pts

    The Poetic Bandits

    ~Lilac


  • -LilacThOughts- gold member
    April 22, 2007

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    Exceptional penning...

    Gosh this is one of the most eye catching acrostic poems I have ever seen, the presentation is beautiful, as is the poem itself, in fact exquisite to read...you have penned some magical lines, so very inspiring...you have a lovely screen name and now I can see why you have chosen it

    Nice metaphors, imagery, theme and tone, altogether impressive and delightful

    Love and smiles
    ~Lilac


  • -Ink Artist-
    April 22, 2007

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    Beautifully written acrostic of your user name! Sincere self-reflection and done with an elegant presentation to the page. Lovely write!


    ~Lori


  • Lady-Pegasus
    April 21, 2007

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    Very well done , both as an acrostic and in your using of words and punctuation to form a work of art, beautifully done! Best of luck in this and all of your endeavors. Hetohke'e *


  • Lady Altheia gold member
    April 18, 2007

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    I think this is a wonderful acrostic. Your poem is beautifukl that it doesn't even read like an acrostic.


  • grannyeri gold member
    April 16, 2007
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    Great presentation of this poem, background, picture and acrostic poem - liked the way you angled it, rather than leaving it left aligned. makes it seem very different than the ordinary kind.


  • blondone
    April 16, 2007

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    Oh this is so beautiful and the meaning runs deep with emotions, a lovely write, I find strength and love in this write...


  • ForgottenMemories
    April 16, 2007

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    wow fabulous acrostic, I thought it was absoloutly wonderful.. well written!! I don't read many acrostics but out of the ones i have read this one has to be one of the best, you have definetally done well with this one, and I am surprised that this is your first acrostic! fabulous xShad


  • trista gold member
    April 16, 2007

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    I'm not normally a huge fan of acrostic poetry, but this is really beautiful! The shape of the poem alone is just so lovely, and the words and meaning give me a new appreciation for your screen name. Only one thing, I think "fantasys" should be fantasies", unless it was done to keep the shape of the poem? Thanks so much for posting this on the reading board, or I probably, and quite sadly, would have missed reading it.

    Best wishes,
    ~J.


  • oldmanriver1942
    April 15, 2007
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    This is one great write!!

    I am astounded at the artistry of this peace...Three applauds


  • Twinstar
    April 9, 2007
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    Thank you Valarie! I was just experienting with an Acrostic poem and this is what I came up with. I chose the name "Twinstar" as my screen name because I think it reflect & represents the yin yang qualities within oneself. I so appreciate your gracious comment.
    Live Your Dreams
    Debbera


  • superstition
    April 9, 2007
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    What an absolutely beautiful acrostic poem you have written out here! This is one of my favorite ones I've seen. It gives me a whole new perception when it comes to your name...is this how you came up the your name to begin with? This has such incredible depth, and I surely can relate to the words you're speaking of here. Excellent!

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