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Me and my thoughts

I worry, I fear
I solemnly swear
My heart is not where its at
and that I wont be able to sleep; yet another endless night

Thinking deeply
Feeling the emotions crawl through my skin
like a pack of wild animals scavaging for food

This night is not normal
nor has it been the same
only another place where my dreams become my worst nightmares

My only fear,
My only weakness,
The flaw in my being

The one whom I care for most...

So innocent, so fragile
Keeping me on lifes sharp edge
waiting for me to bleed for her yet again, or so it seems...

Do you think I should tell her
that everything she does has an effect on me?
Should I tell her that
it kills me inside that I dont know where or what shes doing everynight?

I trust her, believe me I do
Its the night, and the fools trapped in it that I dont trust.

Too many have been in the place where I cant get to them
Too many times I have failed to save them

I dont want to fail again, not this time.

I dont wanna lose you a second time...I dont

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  • Atrophya
    May 23, 2007
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    many times i have had these thoughts. they eat you alive... dont worry im sure she's fine..


  • MutilatedMe
    April 8, 2007
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    Georgeous

    I know...I just know...that im going to cry...*sniff*
    I miss you darling and dont worry<3laney


  • dream5111
    April 7, 2007

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    "I worry, I fear
    I solemnly swear
    My heart is not where its at
    and that I wont be able to sleep; yet another endless night" is my favorite part i love this poem but it kinda makes me sad makes me think of my ex but its great prolly ur best yet


  • 245Trioxin
    April 7, 2007

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    I had to employ the idea of "if you love someone...you have to let them go" in my life. We couldn't have been closer if someone mended our seams as one.

    It was of urgent matter that I had to move away, far away, but her life was there, and she was my only reason to stay, because I couldn't drag her away.

    Months went by, we trusted one another, but when we met up, and had the most incredible week together...tears welled in our eyes, because we both knew it was good-bye.

    The heart is like fragile steel...strong, and weak. Nothing is impenetrable, and regret...it has its place in the world.


  • AshliiAsphyxiation
    April 7, 2007
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    this is awesome bro. very heartfelt.
    *hugs* good too c u online!!!!!!!!!!!

    xox

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