Revolutionaries stand, unwavering
Against the force of unrelenting power.
Gallantly, the martyr rises up,
To catch the wrath of oppression.
A contest entry
- catch the wind by DancingRed.
300 points, ended April 9, 2007, 7 entries
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I just love revolution the freedom fighter, the martyr, leader
all that i liked it a lot -
Perfectly Short
This reminds me a bit of my entry; same ideas of fighting the unfightable. I hope this isn't penalized for it's shortness because I think any further words would have lessened the power of the punch you pack her. Good luck!
***Rae***
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Although short, or perhaps because it's short, this poem is powerful and effective. An interesting interpretation of the picture, lovely metaphors.
Thanks so much for entering!
DancingRed.
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