There's little reminders on her wrists,
That tell a tale of a broken heart.
Alot of painful memories float free,
From her silent screams of such art.
There's many there; Count them if you wish,
There's one,
There's two,
There's three,
There's four.
So many peices left shattered upon the floor.
A broken heart unfixable.
The pain is unberable.
Memories are unforgettable.
Tears soak in and stain her face,
Whilst she writes a heart breaking tale.
Never wanted to die.
Yet never wanted to fail.
Never wanted to miss one thing.
But she shall now miss everything.
One last breathe fills her,
And one last cut breaks her down.
Smiled just once more,
Never went down with a frown.
One last wish she wrote upon her tainted wrist.
"These scars on my wrist? Don't worry,
Just remember them as how many fucking times,
You went and broke my heart"
Author notes
About a guy. I loved him so much and he loved me until I had very bad family problems and I was generally pretty moody. Well he didnt understand and broke up with me 2 weeks after our 1 year anniversary.
I still love him.
A contest entry
- heartbreak hotel ♥ by Captain Obvious.
375 points, ended April 30, 2007, 52 entries
Gold trophy winner
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Honestly--the only poem worth looking at in this contest.
Props to you, darlin.
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Thanks
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awww this is so sad I am terribly sorry that you have been through so much pain..in some ways I can relate to this. You have a great talent..keep writing and I wish you the best of luck in this contes
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Wow...
I can definitly tell that you were writing with a TON of emotion.
Nice Write**
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I really like this poem, heartbreaks hell, writing generally does help
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