A feeling in the air
Taking flight I feel
A breath taking experience
A kiss with a seal
Tiney pecks upon the cheek
Wistless words
Which make me weak
As I lean in for it
I feel the need
To finally feel
Like you plant a seed
A passion it is
Oh what a feeling of bliss
I feel the tension in the air
As I take that first kiss
My mind takes flight
As my lips touch yours
In that feeling of passion
My mind soars
Author notes
Love takes flight
A contest entry
- First Kiss by ever1der.
450 points, ended April 11, 2007, 15 entries
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Comments
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witless words that make me weak...I like that line a lot and think it expresses how we all feel when we're reaching that moment..thanks for your entry and good luck.
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Its cute
I like it. You didn't have to use over the top sensuality or graphic detail to grab attention and you got the point across. I liked how much you described feeling (because thats important with a kiss!) but didn't go over the top to the point the whole thing relied on the physical experience.
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