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Wishing Star

I wish I may, I wish with might,
to have the wish, I wish each night.
It never changes, not at all
I been wishing so long I'm wondering
if wishin's worth wishing at all.
Falling stars, first one in the sky,
I sat and wished on all I saw.
So which star's the wishing star?
I wish I may, I wish with might,
to have the wish, I wish each night.
I think I've got them all.
I wished on satelites, and planes,
I wished on everything
a wish that's never going to change.
I wish I may, I wish with might,
to have the wish, I wish each night.
I wish for once, my wish would come true
and maybe you'd wish for me too.
Its getting lonely, wishing on my own.
I wish you were with me,
so wouldn't have to wish;
but I can't find that wishing star
and my wish isn't going to change.
I wish I may, I wish with might,
to have the wish, I wish each night.

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  • NeWgIrL2012
    April 9, 2007

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    good concept, but reading it gets confusing cause theres a lot of "wish"'s.... or maybe its just me
    take care and keep writing!
    Liz