Brothers are supposed to stick together
I've always heard blood is thicker than water
Fuck i'd still do life for my brother
But the punk is afraid of our step father
The same man who has made his life better
The same man who pulled us all out of the gutter
But none of this shit realy matters
Because my brother is'nt a true rider
He'll stand in front of a jury and point his finger
Really i could look past all that
But not when i'm disrespected for some lame crap
3 years in prison is'nt far from enough
I cant force him to visit he say's tough
For some reason i will always remember this
Regardless my love for my brother is faultless
The things i would do for him are endless
O well everyone makes mistakes
Mine was expecting him to do something he would'nt
His was thinking i was fake
Hay he might not have been told so,does'nt remember
Brothers are soppsed to stick together
For me blood is and always will be thicker then water.
Jordon i wrote this because it was a way to vent
I put myself in prison,so none of this should really matter
love you baby bro
A contest entry
- I want to feel pain by KnightOfTheRose.
375 points, ended April 9, 2007, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Your Very Best #2 (pre-writes allowed) by Dark Whispers.
415 points, ended April 18, 2007, 38 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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awww so sorry for what has happened this is such a great poem its good to let out what you are feeling I wish you the best of luck and the best of luck in this contest
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the poem was really nice but the cussing really threw the balance of the poem off. great write . thanks for entering
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Your right man brothers are supposed to stick together no matter what I'm sorry for what happened to you. This was good though really emotional! great work and good luck in the contest!!!
-Steve-
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