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~Soulful Inspiration~

 

 

 

Imprints of Soulful inspiration

Penned in indelible ink

Messages filled with compassion

Thoughts and perception always in sync


Penned in indelible ink

Rest words of encouragement

Thoughts and perception always in sync

Never a passing of judgment


Rest words of encouragement

Delivered with care

Never a passing of judgment

On the soul that you just shared


Delivered with care

Messages filled with compassion

On the soul that you jut shared

Imprints of Soulful inspiration

 

 

 

 

 


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Form; Pantoum

A tribute to a wonderful poet, Soulful Woman

Shhhh...Contest, please do not use my name in the context of your comments, As always, thank you ~

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  • individuality gold member
    April 20, 2007

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    a good pantoum piece here, always nice to get poetry written for you. it sure brightens up one's day and i am sure it would have soulful woman's day.


  • Soulful Woman silver member
    April 19, 2007
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    Congratulations on the Gold..Thank you so much for this beautiful piece.
    Soulful Woman


  • Laura
    April 19, 2007

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    ohhh this is amazing so very beautiful congrats on your gold you clearly deserved it as this poem it just perfect xxx

  • Cerulean gold member
    April 18, 2007
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    Congrats on the gold. This poem with it's wonderful form earned it.


  • Rose of Ireland gold member
    April 16, 2007
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    You've penned an awesome poem yet again!!!!


  • naked roots
    April 11, 2007

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    oooh nicely done! I loved the "imprints of soulful inspiration" and I do believe if anyone is a soulful woman it is you!
    I always say I'm going to attempt some of these forms, but I never quite feel confident enough, especially with my writing being as slow-going as it has been lately!
    Great work!

  • Puppydog gold member
    April 11, 2007

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    BEAUTIFUL!

    I am sure she will be so happy with all of our poems for her, she is a wonderful person and sincere friend.


  • superstition
    April 9, 2007

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    I think you did an excellent job with this tribute poem, as always, and you're really able to capture a personality within your words here. The way you're able to keep this poem building upon itself is incredible. Each newly added line compliments the familiar ones so well...excellent flow and all around rhythm with this.


  • Desire gold member
    April 7, 2007

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    Gorgeous-

    Love this Pantoum my Friend on such a Gorgeous verse~

    Beautifully worded with emotions from the Heart that
    follows~
    Lovely dedication

    Best wishes to You in the contest
    Many blessings too
    and much love~ Desire~*~


  • hoodoolover silver member
    April 7, 2007

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    Beautiful pantoun, I am sure that soulful woman will be well pleased with this, and you have made me want to try this form. Very nice!


  • apoeticinjustice gold member
    April 7, 2007

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    beautifully penned, I've been trying to write a pantoum but can't put it together...yours flows wonderfully. A very nice tribute.
    Rory


  • DolphinLass silver member
    April 6, 2007
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    well done good luck

  • Talking Toni gold member
    April 6, 2007

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    I did not know...................

    Soulful Woman but this was a really nice tribute to her. I am assuming that you are describing her work and you did it very nicely. Good luck in the contest I'm sure you will do really well. Take care and thatnks as always for sharing your work with us!!!~~Toni~~


  • Whoochi gold member
    April 6, 2007
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    EXCELLENT...kudos! what a sweet dedication to her...TY for entering my first contest and Good luck!

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