A child of beauty and of love
A child with greatness in their blood
A child to make their mother proud
Who is never cheeky but always loud
A child of happiness and fun
And when around, no moment dull
A child who could change the world
This child to be, your boy or girl!
Author notes
OOOHHH wow, congrats, babies are so cool.
This was actually written for a friend who was expecting and I just changed some of it.
Please tell me what you think
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awww...this is sweet!! I agree with sir ltiad you could take this to hall-mark!! hope your friend likes this as much as I do!
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Cute
Man, this is the type of thing Hall-mark could pay you for! (Not that they pay much) But still, it is neat, and I hope the one it was written for enjoys it also.
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This is good, a very nutral poem. Good Luck!
-NP
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I remember this contest, I saw it up here yesterday or earlier today. I didn't enter it for the fact I'm not good at these kind of poems. ^^ It's nice though, short and sweet something that would make me want to make a ryhme skem for it ^^ tehe,
-Morning
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