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[ Break my heart, ]

Break my heart,
Ill be here waiting.
Call me names,
Ill make excuses.
Lie to me,
Ill believe.

I will wait,
And I will stay
Until my dying day,
For my love for you,
Is stronger than you understand.
Time is only a number,
It will not weaken our bond,
Only strengthen it with
Each sunset.

Faithful I will remain,
Ill watch you grow,
Ill watch you change,
For all your troubles
Ill be there,
As a lover or friend,
Which ever you prefer.

Whisper  the things
You want to be,
And I will show you the way.
Ill make everything Just like heaven.

To spend my life with you,
Would be the sweetest candy,
I promise you,’ ill run away
With you if that’s what you ask.

To see your face existed to see me,
Is the best feeling in the world.
To dance with you in the ocean
To laugh through the years.
Let day light wake us.

Let us love,
Be with me,
Hold me forever.

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  • jacieluves 20you
    April 14, 2007
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    that is the sweetest poem that i have ever read all year long gosh i wish i was as good as you.


  • Ryno
    April 7, 2007

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    Wonderfull ... & excellently beautiful. Simple, but full of bliss and smooth-flowing emotion filled thoughts. Great job.
    ~Ryan~


  • Ancalagon the Black
    April 7, 2007

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    Beautiful
    i really like the end
    the third stanza is my favorite though
    great job
    i'll see you in like an hour