Missing his face,
Simple and caring,
Missing his smile,
Never failing to brighten my day.
Missing his arm,
Wrapped tightly around me,
Missing his touch,
Which makes me nervous,
Missing his kisses,
Warm and sweet
Missing him,
Never knowing when.
But I wake up from this horrible dream,
Remembering , I am still in his arms,
I love him as much as summer’s breeze.
He is all the things I cannot like without,
The surf, the music, the fun.
If his love did go away,
Life would be too painful to stay.
A contest entry
- heartbreak hotel ♥ by Captain Obvious.
375 points, ended April 30, 2007, 52 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Anything and everything !! ( a truthwriter's contest ) by sweethelper.
300 points, ended April 22, 2007, 145 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Great twist. Expertly done! Congratulations on the trophy, I can see why you got one. Wonderfully written. Thanks for sharing. Take care.
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wow this is a really great poem..I can relate to this in soooooo many ways. You have a really great talent in poetry and I wish you the best of luck in this contest...keep writing!
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that one is a great one two
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simply amazing. good luck!- Captain Obvious
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ooooooo did you read me this? o yeah you did. I forgot
this is cool. Once again, the last two lines are my favorites
my touch makes you nervous??
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