Forever today
But never tomorrow
A hope that decays
A love filled with sorrow
A life so divine
He thought his was better than mine
Eternal Bleeding stops his breathing
A gash Across his neck keeps him in constant wreck
His lover not so sincere
She watches him bleed
But she feels no fear
She never loved him, Only used him
Spiraling downward in her fantasy land
She peers down and the knife appeared to be in her hand
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Forever today
But never tomorrow
A hope that decays
A love filled with sorrow
wooo dude i love this its so freaking amazing of an intro
holy freaking crap
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Powerful write, love the last line. 'She looked down and the knife appeared', awesome write dear~ Sie
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