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Holy Waters

Since forever I have bled
Since forever I've shed
Tears of Blood only for you.
Since forever you made me blind
Since foever my inner has died.

My black nails sear me
My own-self fears me.

Pathos of life,
How can you be so naive?
You came to save me Christ?
YOU...in only a fool's disguise.

In cradle I die...
In grave I arise.

This wine I did not pour
This evil was not my chore.
A tourniquet I need nevermore...
..My blood...ceases to reach the shore.

You love me?

Then bleed for me,
Shed for me,
Die for me.
Suffer the nails for me.

the TRINITY..you've have now been forever disgraced.

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  • Nola-999
    April 7, 2007
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    AWSOME!

    I LOVE THE LAST LINE!!!