There once was a man named Jig,
Who went out and brought a wig,
When he entered the shop he was tripped,
And a beautiful dress he ripped.
Now he was willing to pay,
For on this wonderful day,
He had met the girl of his dreams,
But he needed to get her,
Without going to extreams.
He was ugly and fat,
His face resembled a bat,
She was pretty and slim,
Complete opposite of him,
so how could they ever get on?
So he brought a flash car,
And showed her his favourite guitare.
She fell over her heels in love,
Even with all the above,
She saw the beautiful side,
And became his wonderful bride.
So together they do live,
(Because he was so addictive),
And everybody hereafter,
Lived happily ever after.
Author notes
My first go at a full ryming poem - hope it aint't to painful.
A contest entry
- FAIRY TALE CONTEST!!!!!!!! by Sahlili20.
450 points, ended April 10, 2007, 23 entries
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850 points, ended May 13, 2007, 22 entries
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Comments
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Beautiful
Thank you for entering my contest and for the fresh write!--Sahlili20 -
aw, cute, very cute,that made me happy
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