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Cross (an Oddquain)

Cross;
where His Blood
shed for me, redeemed.
Overcame the grave, empty
Tomb  

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Oddquain: Lines are 1,3,5,7,1. Can be found at shadowpoetry.com.

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  • 2lullabyhaven
    April 25, 2007
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    Perfect

    Speaks many volumes and in perfect form. Precise and concise.

  • frio
    April 23, 2007
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    nice

    Oh so very powerful and short and to the point


  • CountryCousin
    April 6, 2007

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    Nice one too.

    I like this one it is simple but powerful, I love these contests and enjoy reading all the enteries. Especially when they add so much to my daily devotions.


  • ShelleyA gold member
    April 6, 2007

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    Hi Glenda. A well crafted oddquain. Lovely depth of feeling. Excellent message for this holy week. A much enjoyed read.


  • Samplette gold member
    April 6, 2007

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    A wonderfully done Oddquain. It tells of a great time that Christ lived and died for us. Where would we be withoug Calvary. Thank you for entering the contest.
    Sam

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