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Crushing Stones (only through time)

The weight like crushing stones

(cold like a stone)

A ghastly rush, a flush, a sickening feeling

Illusory

Erroneous

(why do hearts keep beating?)

Shocking, appalling, dreadful

Reincarnated time

Go back, reverse and undo validated news

A soul mourns

(never knew a soul could cry) till now

 

Children unseen, bereavement ... yet 

Earth Angels, bestow wings

Flight lessons through words

Kindness, compassion, love

(elevate) take flight

a spirit lifted, anew

a process, a course, a lesson

(a tragedy needing acceptance)

But; only through time …

 

 

 

Author notes

I normally do not write through darkness, but today is a shaded day and this needed to be written. You may or may not understand my meanings, for those who know me, you will.


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  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    April 26, 2007

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    Oh my gosh ~ This is absolutely amazing. Written with such depth and feeling. An emotional dive into pain and loss. A piece I shall never forget. Thanks for sharing and congratulations on your much deserving gold... x Love and light, Butterfly.


  • Freed by Mercy silver member
    April 25, 2007
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    Congratulations on your well deserved gold.


  • maa gold member
    April 25, 2007

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    this is exactly what had to spring from your heart ... and please know that it is so very welcome and received with loving care and a gentle touch ... your pain is our pain ... and these are not just words ... I am very touched by the beauty contained within the heartstirring sadness ... the light that you are forever, radiating inmidst the darkness that will pass ...
    I love you, my ancient-soul-sister,

    marion


  • Cupcrazy gold member
    April 22, 2007

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    Oh Dove this is so beautifully written from the darkness of your pain and loss. The weight indeed is a crushing stone. I loved the form and flow and yes you are not one to write darkness, but through this darkness you have written light. I loved it hun. Thank you for your beautiful entry. Hugs, Bunny


  • Freed by Mercy silver member
    April 10, 2007

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    I understand the feelings of loss, Dove, which you have captured here. It is like a crushing stone, exactly.
    This is a tremendous write, born of unimaginable loss.
    But I here a voice of hope, courage and voices of tenderness, too.


  • queen Moderators member
    April 6, 2007
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    Very sad poem,

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