These dark feelings drown me in thoughts of what could've been.
Why i couldn't amount up to the person you wanted me to be.
The color in my once blue eyes, are now a cold shade of gray.
Feeling of regret overcomes me as i begin to shake.
The pain to much to bear,yet i beg for more.
Praying you'll come back but realizing your gone for good,
and that i screwed up.
You laugh as i hurt, cutting myself on my broken heart.
Watching my drown in my own blood and tears.
My once blue eyes are now a cold shade of gray.
A contest entry
- Alone.....Prewrites allowed by LoveNeverDies.
370 points, ended May 17, 2007, 93 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Anything about being heartbroken...or breaking hearts by AngelEyes13.
300 points, ended April 12, 2007, 29 entries
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I know how this feels and I'm sorry that you must live this....as a cutter myself I know what you meant by they don't care.......it's hard but hold on and keep writting
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I know how you feel. I don't think my eyes will ever show the happiness they once held in them. Great write. Good luck! Thanks for entering.
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this was a great poem..your words were strong and very powerful as well...i can relate to this write and found it very beautiful..i loved the ending it was my favorite part..keep writting and good luck in the contest
~Chrissy~
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very very very deep and emotional i totally loved it great great write
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aww babe thats so good
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this is so sad; yet it is heartfilled and pouring your feelings out on a page for everyone to see is never easy. I really like the title.
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