Hot tears in my eyes ready to pour
Hurt feelings I'm trying not to explore
There is a pain in my heart and my head
Thinking of the hurtful things been said
How can something so wonderful to start
End with two lovers being torn apart
In the beginning, when the seed was planted
I felt a love that left me enchanted
From that seed I had hoped for a tree
A love that would blossom for eternity
But now my love tree is bare
The magic is no longer there
A contest entry
- Lost Love ( pre-writes allowed) by Rakerman1.
1100 points, ended April 6, 2007, 23 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Sad, isnt it, when the magic is gone? I feel your agony here.
Very well done and thank you for entering
Raker
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