She sits upon Her Throne – in flower-petals drowned
With nectar of pure Bliss – imbibing words of Grace
All-One, yet not alone – with Joy’s glow She is crowned
Bestowing Wisdom’s kiss – She swallows Time and Space
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She swallows Time and Space – Bestowing Wisdom’s kiss
With Joy’s glow She is crowned – All-One, yet not alone
Imbibing words of Grace – with nectar of pure Bliss
In flower-petals drowned – She sits upon Her Throne
Author notes
in loving dedication to my spiritual mother AMMA
http://www.amma.org/amma/index.html
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METERED MIRROR-RHYME in iambic hexameter by maa –
abab rhyme-scheme (internal and end-rhymes)
internal as well as line-reversals
for more info about this form, please visit my column : http://allpoetry.com/Column/2191585
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painting by paul heussenstamm : http://mandalas.com/SpiritualTeachers/spteachers_gallery.php
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This is lovely! Your rhyme structure is beautiful. You have a gift for smooth unstressed meter. Your poetry is a joy to read. Thank you for sharing.
Love,
Amera ♥
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thank you so much, dear elfin-lady ...
marion
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Amazing. This was done wonderfully, I really wish I could write poems like this. You're amazing! Good luck!
Chelsea
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Wow. Well chosen form for this . Exceptional rhyming and format. Well written, well written.
I've created a new rule for this challenge; please put username in Author's Notes.
Thank-you, best wishes.
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This is... wow... that is really all I can say... you're an amazing poet! Hopefully my rhyme can add up to be half this good! Great write... good luck! Rock on! xoxo Meg
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Wow-
Another Powerful verse You have penned and Love the form You have used
A tricky one and You did a fine job
Beautiful images You bring forth and can feel the Touch of Bliss~ with infusion of Joy!
Loved this one You have presented in addition to the other Gift~
Thank You for sharing this!
Best wishes to You in the contest
Many blessings too
and much love~ Desire~*~
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Well i know my butt has been kicked
Nice format of rhyming
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Intricate and lovely
The mirrored half-lines are an innovation to this form, and you have done it very gracefully. Your subject is also inspiring. A lovely poem. Good luck!
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very beautiful...i guess i'm behind on my knowlsdge of cermonies but i am very intrigued...will do some research on this.
loved the form and the internal rhyme reversed.
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