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~Sepia Stains of Shame~

 

 

 

 

 

I was a baby bud,
born to be beautiful,
pure and poised.
Proud petals of perfection
grown in a gorgeous garden.

Too quickly, I was clutched
from my fragrant family,

fondled by strangers,

harsh hands
of inhumane humans.


I cringed and cried.

My colored white innocence
was weathered,

wilted and withered away
to sepia stains of shame.

My edges singed by shock;

strong stem, snapped,
tainted and tormented
by this touch.


Thorns could not protect me.

Left lonely and lost,
denied my garden’s gift
to blossom and bloom.

Denied a life of love,

I began the dreadful decent
to my demise.
Drained of my dignity,
sadly sickened and diseased.


I slowly dried and died.

 

 

 

 

 

Author notes

Option 1 b. write me a freestyle poem about flowers - this means no rhyme, no meter etc, however, it still needs to flow well. enough said!

metaphoric representation of child sexual abuse in the form of a white rose stolen from the garden.

6.Write about roses. Black, white red. anything. must be roses.

image courtesy of deviantART.com
sepia by malymlecus

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  • RatherImaginative silver member
    August 17, 2007

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    Hood-wink!!!

    So heart-breaking that this rose would need thorns at such a tender age. Your imagery is beautiful, and I only hope that sweet rose will be able to one day bloom again.


  • wolfcub
    April 28, 2007

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    Great flow, great poem! I liked the imagery in here, and the bautiful but terrible way you described everything in such deatil.
    Thankyou for entering and good luck in my contest.


  • Erin200
    April 15, 2007

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    Good job. I love you way you can describe a rose's life. I like it, and that means your going on to the semi-finals! Good job and keep writing!

    Erin200


  • Cannonsfire
    April 6, 2007

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    The style is so lovely but the subject so painful, a white rose of abuse with tears that bleed for it all Love, C

  • FindingFate
    April 6, 2007

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    What a beautiful way to write of abuse. Your alliteration was nice as well.

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