I'll write the truth, but I'll never speak
As it is too painfully bleak
Don’t bother asking how I have been
I’d only lie, so as not to been seen
I cover my face with the makeup I need,
As I cover my wounds that forever bleed
It hurts to know, who I have become
And how I will always be succumb
I will never trust, of that I am sure
I’ve too many secret… secrets galore.
I keep them to myself, I’ll never share
For there’s numerous memories, I can not bare
You asked for a poem, purely about me
My personal life, for others to see.
I’m sorry to say, this is all I can write
It isn’t a lot, but that’s all for tonight.
Author notes
option 2, pictures 7 & 4
this is true of myself. i don't like to talk about myself, but i write poetry about myself, and things i have been through. i have so many horrible memories and it hurts to talk about them, so i dont (which made me think of picture 4). and i cover the true person inside of me with make up and lies, so that people dont see how borken and messed up i truly am (which made me think of picture 7).
i hope this is what you were looking for, and i hope you enjoy it
much love
XoXoX
A contest entry
- Who Are You?! A Dark Contest All About Poets!!!!!(Come in and take a look you WILL not be sorry!!!) by XXBrunettexBarbieXX.
450 points, ended April 18, 2007, 27 entries
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Please tell me what you think
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i wuuv this!!!
this is incredible!...i particularly love the ending!..its soo dark, so painful, so much that wasnt sed yet it feels like you wrote your whole autobiography if tht makes any sence to you??......anyway great poem (yet again!) AWESOME AWESOME WRITE! keep it up.
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aww thank you heaps! i am glad you liked it... i sort of poured my insides out, and let the reader in to no about me... but still didnt tell very much at all.
it is so truethful...
anyway thank you very much for your comment... it means alot
much love
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dark and smooth
this is as dark as black chocolate, mmmm love it, it's sooo deep and like blood it's so thick...i like this poem, it's magical..it makes my eyes stare at it for a long while..and not get distracted...amazing poem..you keep writing k? ...ROCK ON feller, this is one poem I'll clap for...*CLAPS*
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wow i am very glad you liked this one, it is completely true of myself.
thats alot for the comment and applause.. and the claps
*claps* for your comment
take care, and thanks again
XoXoXoX
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This is a very powerfull poem..so full of pain and I can relate to thus poem how you cannot trust anyone..this was such a great poem you are a very talented poet keep it up :
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i am very happy that you liked it, and im glasd i got the piont across. i am sorry you feel the same
if you need to tlak im here, because i will understand what your saying!
much love
XoXoXoX
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wow! this was a really great poem..very blunt and honest..i can really relate to this poem..its so sad and i feel like that to..its alot easier to hide behind a mask and be fake than to let others see your true face..this was a very powerful poem keep writitng your talented and this is what i was looking for and good luck in my contest
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thank you for your comment
i am very sorry you can relate to this i hate the thought of other people feeling this coz its so bad!
anyways much love
XoXoXoX
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Aww sis, this is so sad, but I can relate. This is beautifully written, and I loved the rhyme scheme. Always keep writing, you're good at it!
Much luvv and hugs.
<3BeautifulDisaster9
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awww thanks sis!
im glad you liekd it, and i am sorry you can relate..
you know i love you heaps
take care, much love
XoXoXoX
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its short, and your right it dosent show alot about you, but it dose too. the poem is you. i like this one =] very nice keep writting
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thanks i am glad you liked it.
this one was a bit more free, lol
anyway take care
XoXoXoXoXoXoXoXoX
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this is a great write. its hard to unveil things about yourself, just take it one step at a time.
keep writing,
liz
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your right, when sombody asks you to to tell you the trueth about yourself its hard to do...
thanks for the comment and applause
take care, much love
XoXoXoXoXoX
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A sad write indeed. It is a lot to ask one to bare their deepest selves, even in poetry. It leaves one open again, and your secret part of you should be kept that way till you really find someone to trust.
All the best with this
Gaylene
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thanks for the comment. it is best to keep some thing to urself untill u are sure u have found the right person to trust..
take care
XoXoX
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Another sad write from you
Hope you are ok and I wish I could give you a real life Good luck in the contest and hope letting more of your feelings out was helpful. s and xxxxxxx Luv you.
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yeah i seem to write alot of sad things... i am alright now this one was more written for the contest and not because i was in a bad mood or n e thing. i am fine atm
and yeah letting things out on AP helps because i dont seem to be able to do it wen im talking to people. i keep it to myself.
thanks for the comment and applause AP mum!!!
love you heaps and heaps
XoXoXoX
*i would put kiss's here but i dont remember how* lol
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What a great write! We must be on the same page of our life because that poem just explained so much about how I feel. good luck in the contest! ~amanda~
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oh i am sorry you feel the same as me... but i am glad you liked it, and thanks for the good luck
much love
XoXoXoXoX
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