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Poem - Winning the Lotto

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I would stare and I would shiver, when the postman would deliver
The message that I've won a prize in the Lotto supersize
And to tell you what I'd do, I must explain something to you

Farmhouses in my land are special, each province has its own design

But today they're disappearing, their number simply will decline

Where I live they have small houses and the barns are really big

They have chickens, sheep and horses and sometimes a pinky pig

But even farmers are getting old, they're moving out to homes that care
City folks will buy their property and demolishing start right there
They pull down the sweet old farmhouse, build a bungalow instead
And so they really are destroying, the lovely look my land once had

If I was lucky to win the Lotto, this is what I would like to do
I will buy all vanished houses and rebuild them few by few
I would rent them to some people, who will appreciate tradition
Who will keep this culture living and support me in my mission

But I will tell you honestly, winning the Lotto is not for me
I'll keep dreaming my dream forever, because in numbers I'm not clever
Highest win was a hundred bucks, I love my life but sometimes it sucks

 

 

 

 

 

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© photo: Titia Geertman (JustADutchie)
This is our old farmhouse, we just rebuild the front and put in all the old windows again, like it used to be. It's build in 1900.
The trees in front are also traditional for this area. They're fruit trees, pears in this case and they're cut like this, so they form kind of a sun screen in summer.

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  • Summer Dawn
    April 18, 2007

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    very cute poem. i like yor idea of not changing everything for the times. its good to hold onto the way things used to be, for all kinds of reasons. beautifl write. awesome flow, andit is filled with truth, not words or selfishness.


  • StrawberryKisses
    April 6, 2007

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    A fellow countrywoman! I live in a farm (in Holland, obviously) too! What province do you live in? My farm... well, my parents' farm... is actually a monument. Which is pretty cool, and slightly boring. Cool poem! And I love your rhyme scheme. I only have a few remarks:
    In line 6, it's "their", not "there". And in line 12 it's either "they're" or "they are" but not both.
    Good luck!
    xXx
    Marieke


  • Keith Drew gold member
    April 6, 2007

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    Nice thoughts.

    Yes if only to make our dreams, come true.
    To make this world or your country in this case, more traditional. And in keeping with the way it should be or look.
    Is a wonderful way to gift back all that gives you the inspiration within your heart.
    I have seen many places I worked, or lived in, pulled to the ground. Hardly any of my past survives now of the world I once knew.
    Makes me feel as though I am running all the time, never stopping because the bulldozers of technology and progress, are never far behind!
    Well done!


    • JustADutchie gold member
      April 6, 2007
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      Thanks for the comment. Yes, they call it progress, but they can't build houses like they did before. Nothing wrong with bungalows and villas but they just don't belong in this here farmers land.