Every morning
When I awake
The sight, the scent
The savor of you
Stir my heart and soul
Coffee I need not
Just a cup of you
In a list
A contest entry
- 10 Lines or less! Free Verse Only! by Cupcrazy.
450 points, ended April 6, 2007, 17 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Quick Pre-write Contest by Nicole Hanna.
300 points, ended July 9, 2007, 39 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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LOL Oh man, I was sitting here commenting, thanking every for entering and what have you, and thinking to myself how I could really go for a cup of coffee right now. You have no idea the giggle I got when I got to this piece
Oh yes, and thanks for entering 
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Lovely metaphor, with wonderful imagry and emotion. Great write.
Bunny
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Very Sweet
I like this poem a lot. It's a pretty original metaphor, and those seem to be hard to come by these days. And I like the way you set it up. For the first few lines, the reader might believe that it's a cute little coffee-worship poem, but then, at the end, you make it a powerful love story. And the fact that it's so short makes it even more remarkable. Good work!
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