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is it wrong?

is it wrong to care
for someone who's here?
a person who's nice
but is never near?

to try as hard
as one may try,
but really in the end
you just wanna cry.

to stand here for help
and protect those in need,
but not let them go
because of your greed.

it may not seem right
or seem smart at all,
but a friend is a friend
no matter how large or small.

so what should i do
i need some advice,
to see what is good
and not what is nice,

to find the real answer
of what should be done,
to make life a place
filled with lots of fun.

Please tell me what you think

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  • Athronofaredrose
    March 2, 2008
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    love your poem.

    Keep up the great work.


  • PrettyxoxPoison
    January 30, 2008

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    great write =]. It was very catchy =p. Thanks for commenting my poem. I really liked this. Good Luck and good job


  • a Touch of Madness
    April 6, 2007

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    i like this poem lots makes me remember that i was going through this n still kinda am.
    keep on writting more poems like this