I am shape scraped to your easel and the breath of paint to skin;
I am red tied up in yellow, shedding orange peel veins of sin.
I am beauty to all that’s graphic— as far as eyes can see;
I’m a contour in your pocket and you’re a still frame missing me
Author notes
option six (... obviously written from the perspective of the more attractive sex...lol)
Kj again aka 'Walt Poepitman'
A contest entry
- Word Banks & Categories by silent bee.
425 points, ended April 8, 2007, 14 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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This was really beautiful.. It's really amazing how this blended with the picture and how its so vivid and beautiful..You did such a wonderful job.. Thank you very much for sharing.. And Congratulations on winning the Gold.. Well deserved I think..
Angel
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thank you
you must be an angel to leave such a wonderful comment... I believe.
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I really like it
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thanks so much!
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No wonder this got the gold! Very well inscribed and cleverly thought out!
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Very clever...strong metaphor and flow...very creative and unquie...nice read...conrat's on the Gold!
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Thank you very much.
Missy Istic!
How are you?
I've been busy with work, my book (which is almost finished... finally)and life in general. Once my world starts revolving in a slower, more acceptable orbit I will swing by to catch up on what I've missed.
BFN,
Kj
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Twin Peaks here.
Yes, my man, you have peaked twice here. painting reminds of Klee, poetry cleverly done, but with that sense of power.
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Thanks again dude! I try to stop by your page to return the favor as soon as I get some time... work calls. Boo.
Kj
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Glad you have this in your "Poems I'm focused on"
and I am sorry I missed it before now.
I love it when few lines can say so much... so well.
-adorare le sue parole-
~Kristy
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Kelidiscopically colourful Kj,
You painted a masterpiece and won Gold, very deserving for the brilliant effort that always goes into your work.
Slan Dolores x
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Such great relationships of your concepts in this piece... the metaphor is just great with the imagery of vivid colors having us so easily picture your verses. The picture you chose for the post was perfect as well.
I really enjoyed this piece and found the whole thing overall to be wonderful with its simplicity of "still frame" missing its contents.
another cool write!
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Great use of a word bank. You made it seem so natural in meaning and flow. Well done, very deserving of the Gold.
A nice deep write that says so much in it's brevity.
Fun and enjoyable.
Aren't we all the picture or the frame lost without the other?
Excellent!
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Congrats on the gold! This poem deserved it.
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Thanks dude!
Kj
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WOW...i am speechless! i was kinda scared about this word bank, but you took it and made it, just ~ i can't even explain it! magnificent, beautiful, and just great! good luck and thank you so much for entering this piece!
~bee
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thank you
that's a wonderfully kind comment... it's my pleasure to take part... I've really enjoyed what you've taken the time to share. Hoppy Easter, Kj
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